Comments on: YouTube Group Poem

By: frankieperrone

frankieperrone — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:20 +0000

There was a time, …
There was a time, when all was not right.

Benjaminski — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:19 +0000

I fight. I smite. …
I fight. I smite. I gaze into the open evening sky and contemplate how things are and were and will be again.

vonzip43 — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:19 +0000

When I dirnk OE I …
When I dirnk OE I get real tight!

KNOTTYMAN — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:19 +0000

People would begin …
People would begin to gather at night.

regeneview — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:18 +0000

how did this not …
how did this not get more comments?

i want to make a communal poem!
and one with a bit more depth, my goodness
V

Dadarkilo — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:18 +0000

Te day and night is …
Te day and night is always bright with thought sight.

W2natx420 — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:18 +0000

So people would …
So people would revolt and get ready to fight.

roryphelan — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:18 +0000

hahahahaha I am a …
hahahahaha I am a big fuzzy shite

SlyEyedPoet — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:17 +0000

Poetry should not …
Poetry should not rhyme, because life does not rhyme.

komatoran — Sun, 07 Mar 2010 13:37:17 +0000

All the while …
All the while unknown shadows stalked them out of sight.